Ants
green, yellow
storing, wintering, eating
they work hard despite being very small
insects
I like the poem because it decribes ants' kills. I especially like the part where I wrote "storing, wintering, eating", because these are the characteristics of ants.
If I could change something about the poem, I would change they work hard despite being very small to. Ants are an example of work and organization.
i like the part where you write all,because i think amazing
ReplyDeletei like the part where you write all,because i think amazing
ReplyDeletevery good! I like your words choice!
ReplyDeleteI like picture and your poem.
ReplyDeleteI like your poem a lot. Your poem reminds me of the story about “The ants and the grasshopper”. Do you know this story? Your art is also very beautiful and you described it very well.
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